This was written to me in response of a post I made on a public forum....enjoy!
Whist this forum has been mediocre in its vasteness of entertaining proposals and somewhat intriquing materialisic idiocroces of velligerant commentaries I find it more humerous to see if ONE is actually capable of panning your head and rubbing your stomach simoultameously.
Brownie points to the person who can not only correct the spelling and grammar of the above SENTENCE but also to whomever can decipher its meaning :)
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I like a good challenge.
Original sentence:
Whist this forum has been mediocre in its vasteness of entertaining proposals and somewhat intriquing materialisic idiocroces of velligerant commentaries I find it more humerous to see if ONE is actually capable of panning your head and rubbing your stomach simoultameously.
My corrections:
Whilst this forum has been mediocre in its vastness of entertaining proposals and somewhat intriguing materialistic idiocracies (...which isn't a word...) of vigilant/belligerent commentaries, I find it more humorous to see if ONE is actually capable of patting one's head and rubbing one's stomach simultaneously.
My interpretation:
Although I find the forum's broad interests entertainingly idiotic, I believe my time would be better spent observing whether any of you have the capacity to perform two opposing tasks simultaneously.
How'd I do? Do I win anything tangible?
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